Hi Brandon. I'm glad you finally worked this out. Sorry about the lost elements. In this version, I like the echo of your voice. It fits with the abstract tone of the piece. The contrast between the tone of the words and the tone of the music that you mention in your reflection letter is also successful. At times, though, the volume of the music overpowers your voice just a bit.
Two things: First, your link doesn't work. I had to cut and past it into a browser. Next, very poetic feel to story. Your refl. letter left me wanting to know more about the connection between the carnival images and the event you are commemorating.
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Hi Brandon. I'm glad you finally worked this out. Sorry about the lost elements. In this version, I like the echo of your voice. It fits with the abstract tone of the piece. The contrast between the tone of the words and the tone of the music that you mention in your reflection letter is also successful. At times, though, the volume of the music overpowers your voice just a bit.
Two things: First, your link doesn't work. I had to cut and past it into a browser. Next, very poetic feel to story. Your refl. letter left me wanting to know more about the connection between the carnival images and the event you are commemorating.
Casey
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